Though misproprotionate at times your story line is excelent and sometimes you can pull out a really excelent panal like the first one.
sister says:
I love the last panel too. The hand touching the water. The surprise hit on the head.
Bubbles says:
I like the shading on the walls of the cave in the last panel.
*Skittles* says:
Yea, it's neat
Shadow Phoenix says:
Ooh, cliffhanger! Except, of course, that I'm writing this a year after it came up, and have therefore read all subsequent comics. Nice cave lighting in the last 2 panels.
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